Apocalypses objective marker

Heres an Apocalypse marker ive been working on for the big game

Any critisism is welcome negative and positive plus any suggestions on how to fix the negatives

Ps if u have anything negative to say i wont hate you or get mad or anything so feel free to critique my work

I think it looks really good. I especially like the blown off leg. The armor actually looks like it was ripped apart, and the steel rod bone is excellent.
The chainsword looks a little off to me. Probably to late to change it now, but if you has some really fine guage wire you could wrap it around the steel pin and glue it on. Thats how i do the grips on all my custom weapons. I like the basing really nice, and im not sure where you got the canister he is holding but it looks wicked. If you want to take this to the next level you could look up a tutorial on posing marines. It is pretty tough, and i have only had moderate success with it, but it gets you thinking on the next level.
Again very nice, and creative, hope to see more in the future.

yea it is too late to change the chains sword but the idea i was going for was the canister is a gene seed and this heroic marinecast aside his chainsword in a last ditch effort to save the gene seed

and thats the background behind it

I just wanted to throw in two cents. Not being an incredibly gifted modeller myself, I think you're far better than I ever have been or perhaps ever will be, accept this as hypocritical if you wish, but for the story wise of the Space Marine protecting the Gene-seed, more corpses either of his fellow Space Marines or his adversaries, or painting him as an Apothecary would certainly work towards the general theme. Just my thoughts though.

Justin

My pleasure i love modelling and justin, i will try to throw on a few corpses

Ok so Im sorry justin but when i posted that i would throw more corpses on the marker after that i realized that the markers topcoat was drying. but anyways here is the finished product.